Thank you! It’s a rather old piece, actually pretty old. I was reading it today and I thought it was pretty good. My attempt at a punk-rock Christmas story.
Wow. This is visceral raw and emotional. You take a character and show how he was molded to become cold blooded. I like the pace and how you show so much in a short period of time. Pace feels comfortable and the emotions run deep. Very well done!
Thank you Connor! I'm glad you liked it! Maybe I know madness too well? (where's a smiley emoji for that? I hate :) ) I will make the time to read your posts! Thank you for the restack too! Best! Jim
Wow, dark and very well written. You made it feel very personal and somewhat intimate at times. Great writing ❤️
Thank you! It’s a rather old piece, actually pretty old. I was reading it today and I thought it was pretty good. My attempt at a punk-rock Christmas story.
Wow. This is visceral raw and emotional. You take a character and show how he was molded to become cold blooded. I like the pace and how you show so much in a short period of time. Pace feels comfortable and the emotions run deep. Very well done!
Thank you Connor! I'm glad you liked it! Maybe I know madness too well? (where's a smiley emoji for that? I hate :) ) I will make the time to read your posts! Thank you for the restack too! Best! Jim
My pleasure. Really enjoyed it. Looking forward to reading more of your work.